A busy OU day with a tutorial and a TMA due back. The TMA result arrived during the tutorial, and hurrah it was an increased score on TMA02. Only 6 points but it takes it up above the 70 barrier.
I still need to work more on signposting, and repeated myself a couple of times. I need to try and write even more like talking to a small child, but overall I think it showed improvement over the previous essay and I have a better idea now about what the tutor is looking for.